Renvyle

Her look begged a thousand begs,
Such that i could not reach
Her as she trawled the stoney beach,
For ragged drowned things,
Such that i could not hear
Her cold water screech.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
May 1, 2012 at 6:38 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life Johnny. Love, Carol
Ekpemandu Avatar
April 27, 2012 at 3:03 PM
hi,its nice stopping by to read your poem..welcome to poetry....hope you find it exciting here like i did
Kiely Avatar
April 28, 2012 at 6:43 AM
thanks dude!
Andresen Avatar
April 26, 2012 at 11:41 AM
Welcome to P-Soup Johnny, like your poem alot - well written. - oxox Anne-Lise
Kiely Avatar
April 26, 2012 at 12:02 PM
thank you!!
Grisetti Avatar
April 25, 2012 at 9:37 PM
Very interesting, "cold water screech". I like that line.
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