Rented Sky

Star to let
to a cat lover
and friend of

less perfect dahlias,
to putter-outers of
unwashed milk bottles;

to curtain shifters
and spectacle sinkers,
to all those gods

in Victoria`s long terraces
all waiting for
the flat upstairs.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Makama Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 9:11 AM
Reading through your words gives a majestic result of creating expectations and at the same time meeting them. This is awesome considering the feat achieved in a few lines. Great write friend and please keep on letting your heart speak for us to learn and enjoy. A def 7
Philibert Avatar
May 24, 2015 at 4:10 AM
Thanks for the kind words
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