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Renoirs Redfox

RENOIR’S REDFOX

Fall’s raven-black hat
highlights her redfox-wool locks —
the xanthous sun leaps
from the buttery bouquet
twinkling in the atmosphere

10/29/2019

Copyright © Kim Rodrigues | Year Posted 2019

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October 31, 2019 at 1:42 PM

Bingo! This is how a tanka should look/read/be written. A FAVE for me, Kim. So well-penned. Smiles, Gershon

October 31, 2019 at 5:44 PM

Thanks so much! Hugs...Kim

October 30, 2019 at 12:33 PM

Beautiful...love the imagery, Kim. Regards // paul

October 30, 2019 at 1:14 PM

Thank you, dear poet!

October 30, 2019 at 10:33 AM

Hey Kimmy...nice wording...superb read...all the best my friend...^WW^ :o)

October 30, 2019 at 11:04 AM

Thank you, WW!

October 30, 2019 at 10:27 AM

Nice choice of words and light use of alliteration...

October 30, 2019 at 11:04 AM

Thank you, dear poet!

Caren Krutsinger

October 30, 2019 at 10:00 AM

Gorgeously done Kim.

October 30, 2019 at 11:03 AM

Thank you, Caren!

Richard Lamoureux

October 30, 2019 at 9:27 AM

This is pretty. Hugs Rick.

October 30, 2019 at 11:03 AM

Thanks so much, Richard!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

October 30, 2019 at 8:19 AM

Fantastic imagery! It leaps from the page, xomo!

October 30, 2019 at 8:28 AM

Thank you so much, Maureen! Hugs...Kim

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