Renewal Or Folly

Vain mankind, you measure and image objectives
You build, and tear down, errect and level the fomer, 
Lauded structures, become despised, as you search
For validation ' as you sense the cold expanse of
Eternity, and its structure ' always expanding it has no
Base known to humanity.' Man cannot fathom or weigh
Its complexlity, its simple existence mesmerises us
As we struggle with basic human needs.' As we value
That which we posses. Yet will never own.' As so many
Elevate themselves to claim kingship, to promote war
And to control, they are lost in their aging..in the shell
Of decompisition, they place their trust, plot courses
And yet know they must depart.' For God is tearing them
Apart, dissasembling, to cast away the dross, to reshape
The clay.' Man rages in vain against his creator; he copies
And yet curses, denigrates others to obtain more yet
Will never own more..More than a chance! a one time
Opportunity to recieve enlightenment, through Jesus
Christ, the gift of God, the Holy Spirit wafts and waves
Over us morning and night.' Awake to salvation embrace
The light.'

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 10/13/2023 7:16:00 AM
God will indeed tear down mankind's nightmare of a world under the evil one's command. It will happen sooner than many imagine. Interesting write joe
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Joe Maverick
Date: 10/13/2023 1:12:00 PM
Thsnks Tom,' its where unbridled Ideology has taken us.' We need Gods governance truly.'
Date: 10/13/2023 5:38:00 AM
This is deep, and intriguing, left me thinking deeper than usual. Theres many lines that hit strong! Enjoyed reading this
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Joe Maverick
Date: 10/13/2023 1:15:00 PM
Thank you; I E.' It seems never Enough your response gives Me comfort, good of you to Look in.'
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