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Renewal

I felt time change in the air
Stopping and restarting so suddenly
Any mortal would have missed it.

But I felt its renewal
As I walked down the lane...
And met up with my heart.

I felt the wind caress my thoughts
reassuring of the future's changeably...
Nothing and all: is fate.

Like a dove and twig; inseparable.
And like the oncoming sunset
in its surreal majesty.

I felt time change in the air
Stopping and restarting so suddenly
Any mortal would have missed it.

But I felt its renewal
As I walked down the lane...
And met up with my heart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/26/2011 10:17:00 AM
It feels so good to be able to sit here and read your very creative writing this morning Eliza. I do hope to come back soon and read more of your excellent work. Love, Carol
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