Renewal

In time

The winter winds

Erase the old year's scars

Leaving a fresh canvas to paint

Again
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Ryerson Avatar
November 20, 2009 at 4:18 AM
Once again...beautiful wisdom and insight...can't wait to see what you paint on that fresh canvas (again) - Tim
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November 20, 2009 at 3:51 AM
This is one of my favorites. Thank you for sharing. I wish you could see the easel that I bought. It is made of natural wood...not processed into boards. I had planned to display some of my paintings, one at a time on it when I placed it on the woodland edge. But, as I put it into place, I realized that the painting was the woodlands and the easel takes one's mind there. Your poem reminds me of that beauty. Wonderful write. Lovingly, Dane Ann
Dufresne Avatar
November 19, 2009 at 7:19 PM
I am just learning about form, Barbara and it seems to me you have painted a fine traditional Cinquain canvas here. Enjoyed Robert
Loving Iii Avatar
November 19, 2009 at 5:07 PM
so true. and snows a canvas. john h loving iii
Davila Avatar
November 19, 2009 at 3:51 PM
thank you very much for your comment i appriciate it alot if you can just give me some pointers on what i have to fix
Brown Avatar
November 19, 2009 at 10:47 AM
Thank you for sharing your splendid writing with us Barbara. May this week find you in good health and your pen be overflowing with inspiration. Love, Carol
Austin Avatar
November 19, 2009 at 9:30 AM
Good harbinger of fall and winter. Love it. daver
Owens Avatar
November 18, 2009 at 9:52 PM
Love this descriptions...Enjoyed...Marty
Babcock Avatar
November 18, 2009 at 8:00 PM
I love the spring and the beautiful colors. Winter is almost on us again and we are so fortunate to not have snow so far. Thank you for your kind comments. God Bless Phyl
Bingham Avatar
November 18, 2009 at 7:21 PM
And I am always ready to view His awesome works. God Bless. Ron
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