Renewal

In time The winter winds Erase the old year's scars Leaving a fresh canvas to paint Again

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Tim Ryerson

Date: 11/20/2009 4:18:00 AM

Once again...beautiful wisdom and insight...can't wait to see what you paint on that fresh canvas (again) - Tim

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 11/20/2009 3:51:00 AM

This is one of my favorites. Thank you for sharing. I wish you could see the easel that I bought. It is made of natural wood...not processed into boards. I had planned to display some of my paintings, one at a time on it when I placed it on the woodland edge. But, as I put it into place, I realized that the painting was the woodlands and the easel takes one's mind there. Your poem reminds me of that beauty. Wonderful write. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 11/19/2009 7:19:00 PM

I am just learning about form, Barbara and it seems to me you have painted a fine traditional Cinquain canvas here. Enjoyed Robert

John Loving Iii

Date: 11/19/2009 5:07:00 PM

so true. and snows a canvas. john h loving iii

Jessica Davila

Date: 11/19/2009 3:51:00 PM

thank you very much for your comment i appriciate it alot if you can just give me some pointers on what i have to fix

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/19/2009 10:47:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your splendid writing with us Barbara. May this week find you in good health and your pen be overflowing with inspiration. Love, Carol

Daver Austin

Date: 11/19/2009 9:30:00 AM

Good harbinger of fall and winter. Love it. daver

Marty Owens

Date: 11/18/2009 9:52:00 PM

Love this descriptions...Enjoyed...Marty

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 11/18/2009 8:00:00 PM

I love the spring and the beautiful colors. Winter is almost on us again and we are so fortunate to not have snow so far. Thank you for your kind comments. God Bless Phyl

Ronald Bingham

Date: 11/18/2009 7:21:00 PM

And I am always ready to view His awesome works. God Bless. Ron