Renewal

Pink blossoms drift down Caressing the warming earth The tree stands reborn

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Raul Moreno

Date: 3/16/2009 1:38:00 AM

Masterful haiku BG, nice flow...Raul

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 3/11/2009 9:02:00 AM

Very beautiful soft lite picture you painted! Laura :)

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/11/2009 6:51:00 AM

Love this ....so much softness to see in this brief, sweet haiku. ~ love, Carrie

Amy Swanson

Date: 3/11/2009 6:43:00 AM

What a lovely feel to this haiku! I love the image I got, and the second line I thought was especially beautiful. Wonderful and tranquil write! :) Love, Amy

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/11/2009 6:17:00 AM

Such a beautiful visual. Lovely to imagine in my mind's eye on this dreary, rainy day. Will be thinking of you tomorrow. Love, Shar

Arany P.

Date: 3/10/2009 11:22:00 PM

pink blossoms... caressing earth... reborn! she is a very beautiful spring isn't she!?! lovely haiku... the title perfectly fitting the write!! lovely picture!! ~ Arany

Laurie Ginn

Date: 3/10/2009 9:07:00 PM

Thinking of pink blossoms made me happy, oh so close it is now.

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 3/10/2009 8:41:00 PM

Dear BARBEEG, BARBARA JEAN, YOU capture the essence of Spring Is this for Carol's spring contest GOOD LUCK LOVE YOU ALWAYS...HG Beeg, I followed YOUR Advice "continue writing " Please read A POETS' Heart -- Speaks part 2 I would LOVE YOUR input as I LOVE YOU...HG