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Rendezvous

the sun takes its leave
to her abode he is led
secrets are made in the dark

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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

November 30, 2014 at 10:18 AM

secrets are made in the dark...it's great.This one very special. Loved it JoanXXXX God blessXXX rajat

Joanmarie Peranteau

December 2, 2014 at 10:37 AM

Thank you Rajat, I appreciate you reading my poem and commenting.

Michael Newman

November 29, 2014 at 2:24 PM

Neatly written,good contrasts Miken.

Joanmarie Peranteau

December 2, 2014 at 10:38 AM

Ooooh, Ok Miken, thanks for responding to that question.

Michael Newman

November 29, 2014 at 5:39 PM

Oops. no full stop after contrasts.. Miken is just a poet nickname .All the best.

Joanmarie Peranteau

November 29, 2014 at 4:36 PM

Thank you so much for reading and your encouraging comment. In your comment there is the word or name Miken. Is this your name or is it a word?

Faye Gibson

November 29, 2014 at 9:27 AM

Nicely done.

Joanmarie Peranteau

November 29, 2014 at 4:36 PM

Thank you.

David Meade

November 28, 2014 at 4:27 PM

Now I really like this -- my imagination is in overtime . . . you created just the right mood -- sunset, and then closed it in noisy shadows .. . at least in my mind . . . I see it clearly. a fav for me

Joanmarie Peranteau

December 2, 2014 at 10:43 AM

Thank you Greg for your response to my question, very helpful and very much appreciated.

Joanmarie Peranteau

November 29, 2014 at 4:58 PM

Could you explain about this rating system that poetry soup has? I just happened to notice it on this poem, I never paid any attention to it, as a matter of fact I am still challenged when it comes to this site. I notice there was a rating of 7 and now it is 6.

Joanmarie Peranteau

November 29, 2014 at 4:51 PM

Many thanks for reading, Many thanks for your gracious and encouraging comments. I really appreciate you sharing your thoughts on my write, it helps me with seeing whether or not I am conveying the thought, Imagery, feeling, etc....etc...to all those reading.