Rendezvous

Her 
prince
waited
by the sea
to etch her portrait
in powdery sands beside him
before nocturnal waves danced in sheer moonlight kisses;
Alas, too late in rendezvous, she captured his evanescent silhouette no more.

angstlost lovefibonacci

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Sara Kendrick

August 6, 2024 at 4:33 AM

Good one. I enjoyed reading it today. Thanks for sharing it with us. I appreciate the honor of placing in your contest. Sorry so long about letting you know. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich

February 29, 2024 at 12:46 PM

ahhh, very smooth fibonacci

Beata Agustin

February 28, 2024 at 4:02 AM

Good day, Kabayan. Magandang araw! Thanks for my placement in your recently-judged contest... honouring our country. God bless you.

Valsa George

February 25, 2024 at 8:01 PM

I missed this beautiful gem. So sad....! Partings come unexpected and unknown. As the waves wash away the dream castles, she too got washed away

Andrea Dietrich

January 30, 2024 at 1:18 PM

this is so beautiful, and it has a sweet melancholy tone to it.

Ink Empress

January 27, 2024 at 5:01 AM

Beautiful imagery and storyline, evocative and soulful: i love how descriptive this is. Island ish vibe it emanates in the most eloquent manner. Especially love the lines “ in powdery sands beside him before nocturnal waves danced in sheer moonlight kisses“ so beautiful and so deeply moving, and touching! Congratulations on your well deserved win: thank you for sharing

JC Brul

January 29, 2024 at 12:22 PM

Thank you Ink Empress.This is my first attempt on Fibonacci, I am glad you liked it. Feel honoured for my placement. I am inspired.