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Rendezvous

Sun is beating Body's heating Await the meeting Of my love Thoughts are fleeting Touches needing Eyes are pleading For my love Now he enters In he saunters Bearing favours For his love

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Gregory Golden

Date: 1/31/2009 4:02:00 AM

A very nice smooth flowing poem with synchronicity.

Sharon Winter

Date: 1/30/2009 4:08:00 AM

Oooh la la! What I also love about this one is what is NOT written. Always a sign of great poetry. Love, Shar

Corinne Curcio

Date: 1/29/2009 5:45:00 PM

Lovely - I agree - there should be a sequel - or perhaps another verse for this one :-)

Derrick Burton

Date: 1/28/2009 11:06:00 AM

Another wonderful piece of poetry. have a great day.

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/28/2009 8:02:00 AM

Now things are really happening....what comes next?? You must write a sequel ! :) Love, Carrie

Christopher Higgins

Date: 1/28/2009 6:41:00 AM

Beautiful write that captures the need and satisfaction..well done.

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 1/28/2009 5:25:00 AM

Sounds like a xperfect moment, a true rendezvous. Love the easy flow to this and the imagery which conveys the meaning. Michael