Donna Golden Poet Verse

Rendezvous

Sun is beating
Body's heating
Await the meeting
Of my love

Thoughts are fleeting
Touches needing
Eyes are pleading 
For my love

Now he enters
In he saunters
Bearing favours
For his love

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Gregory Golden January 31, 2009 at 4:02 AM A very nice smooth flowing poem with synchronicity.

Sharon Winter January 30, 2009 at 4:08 AM Oooh la la! What I also love about this one is what is NOT written. Always a sign of great poetry. Love, Shar

Corinne Curcio January 29, 2009 at 5:45 PM Lovely - I agree - there should be a sequel - or perhaps another verse for this one :-)

Derrick Burton January 28, 2009 at 11:06 AM Another wonderful piece of poetry. have a great day.

Carrie Richards January 28, 2009 at 8:02 AM Now things are really happening....what comes next?? You must write a sequel ! :) Love, Carrie

Christopher Higgins January 28, 2009 at 6:41 AM Beautiful write that captures the need and satisfaction..well done.

Michael Degenhardt January 28, 2009 at 5:25 AM Sounds like a xperfect moment, a true rendezvous. Love the easy flow to this and the imagery which conveys the meaning. Michael