Rendezvous

There's an arch of music
Under the tranquil lighthouse
Glide towards me my beloved
We'll walk on the roads
Beyond that galactic sky
Wrapped under the cozy blanket 
Of shimmering little guiding stars

The moon doesn't make a sound 
We'll hide behind the cotton clouds
Each molecule will light up
Each one will dive deep
Into the enchanted midnight of our love
That would stay undeterred 
Embrace me like sleep does

You'll peep into my heart
With your half-opened eyes
Hiding behind your palms
Like lazy sun rays of a Winter morning
We'll talk of folk music and tales
Beside the warm fire of our love
Where the dawn wouldn't end
And the night would never arrive
The golden dusk would go on
And if dusk ever ends
Dawn would sleep on
That enchanting midnight would go on
Hold me close when I can't sleep
Sing to me the lullabies of our love

My heart seems to be lost
Somewhere in those terrains
And you are still unaware
This anxiety dissolves me
More into you than I am
I have been floating around
In the silent depths of your eyes
And you are still unaware
That newborn pearls spill out 
Of the lips of silver seashells tonight
And songs are getting drunk 
Over the melodies of the past
The ocean sleeps under the
Blanket of her own waves
Yet I am awake 
Drunk and drowsy with your love
But you are still unaware
I await your arrival
Under that arch of music tonight

May 15, 2020
BRIAN'S CHOICE D,any form,any theme
Winner: First Place

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Date: 11/10/2020 6:14:00 PM
I loved the lines 'the ocean sleeps under the blanket of her own waves' and 'under that arch of music tonight'. Your poem makes wonderful use of romantic language with the tranquil lighthouse, the shimmering stars, the enchanting midnight, and the 'silent depths of your eyes'. You have such immense talent for poetry, dear Aditi ~ John
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Date: 6/19/2020 9:47:00 AM
Great use of imagery in this heart felt love poem.
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/20/2020 12:17:00 PM
Glad you loved it James. Thank you :)
Date: 5/21/2020 12:46:00 AM
Awesome imagery, Aditi. Well crafted.
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/21/2020 1:38:00 AM
Glad you loved it Line. Thank you :)
Date: 5/16/2020 8:04:00 PM
A romantic rendezvous indeed. Aditi. Also, appreciate your efforts to write new poems in Brian's contests though old ones are also permitted. Congrats. Mohan
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/16/2020 9:53:00 PM
I am blessed to receive all the love and encouragement from talented poets like you. Feel really appreciated. Thank you Mohan. God bless you :)
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 5/16/2020 8:09:00 PM
Just realised that you are new on PS. But it seems you are already a veteran here winning hearts by your muse. Congrats and welcome.
Date: 5/15/2020 11:09:00 PM
Congratulated Fecilitated Bravo On Your Top Win
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/15/2020 11:24:00 PM
Thank you so much Gideon :)
Date: 5/15/2020 12:01:00 PM
Delighted I am, your poem won first place in Brian's contest. Big congrats, Aditi.
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/15/2020 12:16:00 PM
Thank you for dropping by to wish me here Vijay :) Blessed.
Date: 5/15/2020 6:52:00 AM
A tremendous write, Aditi...enamored in concert of feelings love emanates. You held my attention from start to finish with your charming depiction...in gems like: ..Embrace me like sleep does..
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/15/2020 7:48:00 AM
I am gracefully bestowed by your kind and generous words. Thank you for appreciating Vijay :)
Date: 5/15/2020 4:47:00 AM
The moon doesn't make a sound..The ocean sleeps under the.. Blanket of her own waves..Poetry at its best..Beautifully penned..
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/15/2020 5:00:00 AM
Glad you loved it. Thank you Jenish :)
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