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Rendezvous

There's an arch of music Under the tranquil lighthouse Glide towards me my beloved We'll walk on the roads Beyond that galactic sky Wrapped under the cozy blanket Of shimmering little guiding stars The moon doesn't make a sound We'll hide behind the cotton clouds Each molecule will light up Each one will dive deep Into the enchanted midnight of our love That would stay undeterred Embrace me like sleep does You'll peep into my heart With your half-opened eyes Hiding behind your palms Like lazy sun rays of a Winter morning We'll talk of folk music and tales Beside the warm fire of our love Where the dawn wouldn't end And the night would never arrive The golden dusk would go on And if dusk ever ends Dawn would sleep on That enchanting midnight would go on Hold me close when I can't sleep Sing to me the lullabies of our love My heart seems to be lost Somewhere in those terrains And you are still unaware This anxiety dissolves me More into you than I am I have been floating around In the silent depths of your eyes And you are still unaware That newborn pearls spill out Of the lips of silver seashells tonight And songs are getting drunk Over the melodies of the past The ocean sleeps under the Blanket of her own waves Yet I am awake Drunk and drowsy with your love But you are still unaware I await your arrival Under that arch of music tonight May 15, 2020 BRIAN'S CHOICE D,any form,any theme Winner: First Place

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Date: 11/10/2020 6:14:00 PM
I loved the lines 'the ocean sleeps under the blanket of her own waves' and 'under that arch of music tonight'. Your poem makes wonderful use of romantic language with the tranquil lighthouse, the shimmering stars, the enchanting midnight, and the 'silent depths of your eyes'. You have such immense talent for poetry, dear Aditi ~ John
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Date: 6/19/2020 9:47:00 AM
Great use of imagery in this heart felt love poem.
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/20/2020 12:17:00 PM
Glad you loved it James. Thank you :)
Date: 5/21/2020 12:46:00 AM
Awesome imagery, Aditi. Well crafted.
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/21/2020 1:38:00 AM
Glad you loved it Line. Thank you :)
Date: 5/16/2020 8:04:00 PM
A romantic rendezvous indeed. Aditi. Also, appreciate your efforts to write new poems in Brian's contests though old ones are also permitted. Congrats. Mohan
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/16/2020 9:53:00 PM
I am blessed to receive all the love and encouragement from talented poets like you. Feel really appreciated. Thank you Mohan. God bless you :)
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 5/16/2020 8:09:00 PM
Just realised that you are new on PS. But it seems you are already a veteran here winning hearts by your muse. Congrats and welcome.
Date: 5/15/2020 11:09:00 PM
Congratulated Fecilitated Bravo On Your Top Win
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/15/2020 11:24:00 PM
Thank you so much Gideon :)
Date: 5/15/2020 12:01:00 PM
Delighted I am, your poem won first place in Brian's contest. Big congrats, Aditi.
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/15/2020 12:16:00 PM
Thank you for dropping by to wish me here Vijay :) Blessed.
Date: 5/15/2020 6:52:00 AM
A tremendous write, Aditi...enamored in concert of feelings love emanates. You held my attention from start to finish with your charming depiction...in gems like: ..Embrace me like sleep does..
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/15/2020 7:48:00 AM
I am gracefully bestowed by your kind and generous words. Thank you for appreciating Vijay :)
Date: 5/15/2020 4:47:00 AM
The moon doesn't make a sound..The ocean sleeps under the.. Blanket of her own waves..Poetry at its best..Beautifully penned..
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/15/2020 5:00:00 AM
Glad you loved it. Thank you Jenish :)

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