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I tucked out the earth with both my shaky arms. I sighed out loudly till a sob terrified me to death. A giant heart touched me with my final breath. No dark disguise, by God, can hide this charm. The earth is heart-shaped, and heaven is above. Beyond pure joy, souls might encounter God. They refuse to split, or the sun sets over a trod. The heart can pulsate water rise and earth move. Deathly sleep at the mercy of brutality. The Earth's ultimate radiance was lost. All the huge hope ever to be given had a cost. His once proud world was ruined by humanity. A haughty beast has conquered the earth. A world where neither love, life, nor death matter. His conduct was utterly impolite and shatter. No friendship, no religion, not a shred of worth. He usually came to a halt due to his torn feet. He hefted a broken metal remnant in his hand. Looking everywhere to find the burgundy land. Throw it away and proceed without deceit. I asked the stranger why he was there, instead. Where does battered earth gaze up at the stars? It might be a gift from a loyal friend of the arms. I caught sight of his eyes as he tilted his head. What are you seeking with those epic eyes? I urged once more where the false heroes fell. Faith is always and forever buried and can tell. For steel, he urged to design a blade of surprises. Written: October 20, 2022

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Date: 10/20/2022 4:29:00 PM
You lyrics stun me line by line. Their beauty rolls on and on through the rocks and rills of my imagination. Best to you my friend - Ken
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