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Renascence

replacing our well built piles of trash ~ with all new online pop-up tat This or That, Vol 14 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh Renascence prompt chosen How many syllables (17) 10/17/22

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Edward Ibeh

Date: 11/11/2022 4:13:00 PM

Wonderful monoku, David:-) Congratulations on your win in my contest!

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/12/2022 1:11:00 AM

Thank you Edward, as always I’m delighted with a placement in your contest, cheers David

I Am Anaya

Date: 10/28/2022 4:56:00 PM

A new genre? Love it, take out the old and in with the new! Kerplunked US contest on magnetism, was just trying to help out, I was # 44 out of 45 wrote it in one day and didn't get to set it in a rhyme, doing that now! He is a wise man, GL

I Am Anaya
Date: 11/11/2022 2:44:00 PM

Congratulations on your win!

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/29/2022 1:14:00 AM

Very wise man, what you see is what you get with the Seeker, very helpful too, unfortunate you didn’t make the contest or did you? Yeah this one pretty much speaks for itself Anaya, most of it isn’t even recycled, crazy humans love shiny new tat, I am guilty! cheers David

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/28/2022 7:54:00 AM

So true! Constant junk on scroll!

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/28/2022 8:51:00 AM

Remorseless relentless junk, cheers David

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/27/2022 9:38:00 AM

That's all been made in China, tat for tat lol. Tom

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/27/2022 10:51:00 AM

Most definitely Tom, by 7yr old kids, the workforce for the masses, cheers David

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/27/2022 9:23:00 AM

You have stated an excessive amount of information on the renascence in just a few syllables. That is really a beautiful take on how to clear our wells of rubbish that have been accumulated over the years by the same pop-up trash that has followed the technological revolution of the internet. Best wishes with the contest.

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/27/2022 9:30:00 AM

Indeed Lasaad that was always my intention, I couldn’t have explained it better myself, thank you so much for seeing past the word, into my contemporary take on Renascence, cheers David

Jenna Logan

Date: 10/27/2022 8:44:00 AM

I totally like your take on the word, but not sure if Edward will approve of your changing the spelling that he requires. Consider.

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/27/2022 9:26:00 AM

He is fair, I got a good placement in his last contest, so will not complain, if this one flops, I kinda like it though, it’s me for sure!

Jenna Logan
Date: 10/27/2022 9:06:00 AM

I'm wish you the best, David. Edward is a fair judge of poetry and character.

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/27/2022 9:00:00 AM

Ups, Thanks Jenna I always spell it as Renaissance, I honestly don’t expect much from this one in the contest, I shall change it as the contest requires, and see how it goes, cheers for the heads up, David

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/27/2022 6:48:00 AM

Hi David, You said so much in a few words. Best wishes in the contest. Have a nice day-Alexis

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/27/2022 7:03:00 AM

Hey Alexis, I took Renaissance, at face value as a word, rather than ‘The Renaissance’ of the Middle Ages, and put a play on contemporary consumerism, not sure what Edward is looking for, cheers David