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Renascence

buds burst on branches
bathing in beaming sunshine~
nature's jubilee



2 April 2022


Nature in Spring Themed Poetry Contest(Premiere)
Sponsored by Tania Kitchin
8th place 


Notes: Syllables checked(5-7-5)at howmanysyllables.com
I took the above picture of dainty petals sprouting from a rugged cherry blossom's tree this Spring in Silla University, Busan, South Korea.


Brian Strand Contest No. 1170 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Brian Strand
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Gauthier Avatar
December 14, 2022 at 7:48 AM
beautiful ~
Krutsinger Avatar
April 9, 2022 at 12:28 AM
Like the alliteration of this haiku.
George Avatar
April 6, 2022 at 11:06 PM
I knew this would be in the winners list ! Congratulations Jez !
Goldsmith Avatar
April 6, 2022 at 12:37 PM
Congratulations on your win. A pretty write/picture. Spring in all of it's pretty colors. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................
Gauthier Avatar
April 6, 2022 at 12:15 PM
Congrats, JCB ~
Kauffman Avatar
April 6, 2022 at 9:58 AM
A jubilee indeed JCB! Not only does this haiku "burst" with energy and alliteration but the images are so vibrant! A true song of celebration my friend! Congratulations!
Canerdy Avatar
April 6, 2022 at 9:13 AM
Such a lovely haiku, JCB--with great alliteration. CONGRATS on your win. Janice
Kitchin Avatar
April 6, 2022 at 4:22 AM
JCB, congratulations on your winning placement with your wonderful haiku!
Brul Avatar
April 6, 2022 at 4:33 AM
Thank you Tania for my placement. More power.
Calasibetta Avatar
April 6, 2022 at 3:58 AM
Superb Haiku~the imagery and your photo breathtaking. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. :)Paulette
Romios Avatar
April 5, 2022 at 11:21 AM
The picture makes this Haiku come blooming to life in my living room. Thank you....Pangie xo
Ray Choudhury Avatar
April 3, 2022 at 6:12 AM
WOW! Love this haiku. Excellent Alliteration! Totally enchanting !
Dietrich Avatar
April 2, 2022 at 6:36 PM
Oh my. I keep seeing good ones like yours. Honestly I have no idea how the sponsor will judge this premier contest
George Avatar
April 2, 2022 at 9:17 AM
Beautiful.... treading with confidence for a win.... :)
Rodrigues Avatar
April 2, 2022 at 8:02 AM
Beautiful!
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