Renaissance a Freed Verse

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THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FREED VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment

RENAISSANCE phrases radiate feeling the breeze a shiver of contemplation attentive images arrive enthralling & magnificent recurrent to show an inspiration in an enveloping embrace encounters of the open-hearted receiving the reverberating light so mysterious & forcefully present invisible within yet seemingly entirely elsewhere remarkable thus missing the moment altogether perception expressiveness a blessing displayed astounds in close up then & fades to evoke the past

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Nancy Kaufman

Date: 7/1/2023 6:09:00 AM

Hi Brian, What a unique form of poetry this is. I was quite impressed. I imagine it takes quite a while to craft it. Have a wonderful July 4th weekend.