Renaissance a Freed Verse

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THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FREED VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment

RENAISSANCE
phrases radiate
feeling
 the breeze
a shiver
of
contemplation
attentive
images
arrive
enthralling
& magnificent
recurrent
to show
 an inspiration
in an
enveloping
embrace

encounters
of
the
 open-hearted
 receiving
the
reverberating
light
so mysterious
& forcefully
present
invisible within
yet
seemingly
 entirely elsewhere
 remarkable
thus
missing the moment
  altogether

perception
expressiveness
a blessing
displayed
astounds
in
 close up
then
 & fades
to evoke
the past

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Nancy Kaufman

Date: 7/1/2023 6:09:00 AM

Hi Brian, What a unique form of poetry this is. I was quite impressed. I imagine it takes quite a while to craft it. Have a wonderful July 4th weekend.