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Renaissance

From drought’s somber cracks, Reawakened blades emerge: Lush, is on the verge.

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Date: 10/1/2009 11:59:00 AM

So much depth in just three lines. Nice use of rhyme in the last two lines. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for choosing my poem as one of your winners. I am grateful for the opportunity. Have a wonderful day! Karen

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/1/2009 4:01:00 AM

You've got that right. It was crackly around here then just a little rain and it is green again. Then 8 inches and we've got grass growing like summer again. Imaginative way of expressing the idea. Keep writing. Sara

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/30/2009 10:25:00 PM

i love it--Renaissance--love your view--Charma

James Fraser

Date: 9/30/2009 2:00:00 PM

Kool imagery in this Haiku Raul, excellent >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/30/2009 5:41:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Raul. Hope you have a wonderful day. Love, Carol