Renaissance

From drought’s somber cracks,
Reawakened blades emerge:
Lush, is on the verge.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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October 1, 2009 at 11:59 AM
So much depth in just three lines. Nice use of rhyme in the last two lines. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for choosing my poem as one of your winners. I am grateful for the opportunity. Have a wonderful day! Karen
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October 1, 2009 at 4:01 AM
You've got that right. It was crackly around here then just a little rain and it is green again. Then 8 inches and we've got grass growing like summer again. Imaginative way of expressing the idea. Keep writing. Sara
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September 30, 2009 at 10:25 PM
i love it--Renaissance--love your view--Charma
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September 30, 2009 at 2:00 PM
Kool imagery in this Haiku Raul, excellent >> James
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September 30, 2009 at 5:41 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Raul. Hope you have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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