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Remorse for erst acts, heals our soul For we were the doer Face in mirror, that of a ghoul Redemption in prayer Choosing pathways correct Anger and lust ferret We make now stance erect Ego distorts facts Remorse for erst acts 01-September-2021 Quietus

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Date: 9/1/2021 9:29:00 AM
Interesting and thought-provoking, Unseeking Seeker. I liked it immensely. So true..."ego distorts facts!"
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Date: 9/1/2021 9:50:00 AM
Indeed it does! Remove ego and what is left … childlike exuberance, blissful vibrance!
Date: 9/1/2021 6:49:00 AM
You have such a great talent.
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Date: 9/1/2021 7:56:00 AM
Give this form a try, Mohamed