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Remorse For Erst Acts

Remorse for erst acts, heals our soul
For we were the doer
Face in mirror, that of a ghoul
Redemption in prayer

Choosing pathways correct 
Anger and lust ferret 
We make now stance erect

Ego distorts facts
Remorse for erst acts 

01-September-2021
Quietus

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L Milton Hankins September 1, 2021 at 9:29 AM Interesting and thought-provoking, Unseeking Seeker. I liked it immensely. So true..."ego distorts facts!" Unseeking Seeker September 1, 2021 at 9:50 AM Indeed it does! Remove ego and what is left … childlike exuberance, blissful vibrance!

Mohamed Omar September 1, 2021 at 6:49 AM You have such a great talent. Unseeking Seeker September 1, 2021 at 7:56 AM Give this form a try, Mohamed