Remorse

As life fleets us by,
We can only reminisce:
About lost chances.

deathlosssenryu

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Elaine George

June 23, 2010 at 5:54 AM

This is so true! Very though evoking Senryu, Raul. Also, I wish to thank you for the honor and opportunity to write a tribute for one of the greatest poets of our time. Lainie

C.C Bloomsfield

June 10, 2010 at 3:03 PM

Lost chances,we all pass through them,yes those so called 'Regrets'!So touching. .C elene!

Elaine George

June 10, 2010 at 2:44 PM

So very true! Thought evoking Senryu, Raul. Please check your soup mail. Lainie

Sara Kendrick

June 10, 2010 at 1:07 PM

We all have been there and done that at some point in our lives...What we did with that decisive moment defines our character.. Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

June 10, 2010 at 10:31 AM

Yes this is so true. Lots of what if's . Thank you for sharing Raul. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

June 9, 2010 at 7:03 PM

Arts is long and time is fleeting... as the saying goes ... we are left with lost chances but we forgot the chances we have enjoyed. Wonderful thought ,Raul.