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Remodel My Daddy

Dad has always been strict and hard. Me being his little girl, his protection is even stronger. Looking through his eyes, i feel like i'll never grow up, And that's no problem but i deserve to be treated correctly to my age, 15, i know shocking, i have an old soul, I've always wanted, i guess you can say... " A dream dad." A dad you sit around and do your nails, talk about guys, i'm interested in. Just simply, open and honest about everything. Cry on his shoulder when i need to and go shopping with. But its just a dream, it will never ever happen. I thank God, for my fantastic mother and father. 15 years of marriage and still the best parents in the world, in my eyesight. Even though, i want to remodel my daddy. Life isn't Burger King, You can't have things your way!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/3/2009 3:22:00 PM
Thanks Moses, i hope my dad changes like that.
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Date: 7/31/2009 9:25:00 AM
I remember my dad like that, when I was 15, but after I was 30. It's amazing how much that old man learn in just 15 years.Ha! Actually you see it was I who had grown and learn to appreciate his wisdom! God bless Keep up the good writing, Moses
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Date: 7/30/2009 9:06:00 PM
Thanks Jimbo!
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Date: 7/30/2009 3:55:00 PM
a loving tribute! Sabrina! I have 2-Daughters of my own! 21 and 19!!! jimbo
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