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Remnants

over winter’s blast
a woodland trail, branches, twigs
no leaves left to blow
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Miller Avatar
November 13, 2025 at 2:34 AM
A quiet, contemplative scene of winter’s aftermath. Beautifully penned.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 13, 2025 at 5:23 AM
Exact sentiments were assessed within a single line before I branched out.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 12, 2025 at 5:46 PM
sriking imagery that created a tad of sadnes...well penned.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 12, 2025 at 7:17 PM
Thank you, Aloha.
Hind Avatar
November 11, 2025 at 7:54 PM
Beautiful. A sad end is what I felt.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 11, 2025 at 9:24 PM
Nature has its way of expressing itself; winter’s barren trees were once full of life. Seeing both views during times of plenty and of empty.
Kauffman Avatar
November 11, 2025 at 11:50 AM
Hi William! Indeed winter can arrive with a blast leaving behind a white signature! Love the last line! And I love the way you subtly blended both autumn and winter. Best wishes for the contest. Blessings and hugs! So wonderful to have you back, hoaaloha! Aloha!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 11, 2025 at 12:15 PM
Aloha, Kakahiaka. Appreciate your warming welcome and your generous good tidings of cheer, marking the advent of the holidays yet to be of worth and memorable fulfillment with family and friends whom we treasure, Ahui hou, malama pono!
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