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Remnant

Remnants

You were a remnant
from the hurricane,
blowing into my life
suddenly,
like a refugee 
on storm~tossed
waves of destruction.

Flooding my life 
with category five
winds of desire,
leaving me wrecked,
naked and bare,
like old driftwood
on the beach of despair.
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November 7, 2025 at 6:52 AM
wow, I sincerely like your poetic style--the conciseness and brevity, the continuity and flow. Loved the punch of the last two lines.
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