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Reminiscing Sadly At This Sight

None can guess the darkening pain
Dull and aching it is
Emotive and locomotive
It keeps me never at ease

Disease to rhyme with universe
When ready it is to cry
Maimed at the mere sight
Of evil, winning as the spy!

Honorable mention in Sara's contest : My Quiet Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/20/2012 11:42:00 AM
I am finally able to comment on your win in Sara's "My Quiet Place" contest. Congratulations Anoucheka. Love, Carol
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 9/21/2012 4:32:00 AM
Thks Carol... Keep well :)
Date: 9/20/2012 2:51:00 AM
Poignant write this! Love your delivery!
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 9/21/2012 4:32:00 AM
Thk you :)
Date: 9/17/2012 5:04:00 PM
Congrats on your placement...Sara
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 9/21/2012 4:32:00 AM
Thk you :)
Date: 9/17/2012 10:40:00 AM
ANOUCHEKA, , congratulations with your wonderful win in SARA'S sweet " Quiet Place " contest.. have a nice day~ PD
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 9/21/2012 4:33:00 AM
Thks Loads PD :)

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