Anoucheka Gangabissoon Poet Rhyme

Reminiscing Sadly At This Sight

None can guess the darkening pain
Dull and aching it is
Emotive and locomotive
It keeps me never at ease

Disease to rhyme with universe
When ready it is to cry
Maimed at the mere sight
Of evil, winning as the spy!

Honorable mention in Sara's contest : My Quiet Place

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Carol Sunshine Brown September 20, 2012 at 11:42 AM I am finally able to comment on your win in Sara's "My Quiet Place" contest. Congratulations Anoucheka. Love, Carol Anoucheka Gangabissoon September 21, 2012 at 4:32 AM Thks Carol... Keep well :)

Vicky Tsiluma September 20, 2012 at 2:51 AM Poignant write this! Love your delivery! Anoucheka Gangabissoon September 21, 2012 at 4:32 AM Thk you :)

Sara Kendrick September 17, 2012 at 5:04 PM Congrats on your placement...Sara Anoucheka Gangabissoon September 21, 2012 at 4:32 AM Thk you :)

Poet Destroyer A September 17, 2012 at 10:40 AM ANOUCHEKA, , congratulations with your wonderful win in SARA'S sweet " Quiet Place " contest.. have a nice day~ PD Anoucheka Gangabissoon September 21, 2012 at 4:33 AM Thks Loads PD :)