Reminiscing

Lovers holding hands,
Walking swiftly...open love;
That’s the way we were.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Culverhouse Avatar
March 15, 2010 at 5:32 AM
romantic
Chircop Avatar
March 14, 2010 at 9:58 PM
Sweet Sad memories..lovely senryu..Charma
Tugaff Avatar
March 14, 2010 at 12:10 PM
Indeed a reminiscence of the past- it brings nostalgic memories. I love it. Ernilando
Richards Avatar
March 14, 2010 at 8:42 AM
Ahhh....the memory is sweet, yet rather painful sometimes, to look back on happier moments like this with longing. I really feel that here with this tender senryu, Raul. Lovely but a twist of loneliness too. Well done. Love, Carrie
Cheeseman Avatar
March 14, 2010 at 4:50 AM
Yes remember it well, nicely put Daniel
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
March 14, 2010 at 4:44 AM
The sweetness of youth...well worth reminiscing. Great write, Raul! Smiling, Dane Ann
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