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Reminiscing

Screened porch, sweet iced tea, summer breeze blowing. Good times. Family laughing at old jokes they loved. The shadows grew long. Light faded. They left, and oh, how I miss them. 5/7/2019 Charlieku New Form Poetry Contest Charles Messina, Sponsor

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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 7/5/2019 4:30:00 PM
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This one is short but somehow really tugs at the heart strings P.S. Beautiful! Congratulations on your deserving First Place win! : ) xxoo
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P.S. Awtry
Date: 7/5/2019 7:22:00 PM
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Thank you so much Connie. Glad you liked it :) -ps
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/26/2019 10:01:00 PM
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So like a wonderful day, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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P.S. Awtry
Date: 5/26/2019 10:12:00 PM
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Thank you Eve :)
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Charles Messina
Date: 5/25/2019 8:30:00 PM
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Siuch a lovely and touching poem, P.S. Congratulations on your win. ~Charlie
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P.S. Awtry
Date: 5/26/2019 9:33:00 AM
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Thank you Charlie :). -ps
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/25/2019 1:36:00 PM
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- Congratulations on your great suggestions, P.S. ... a fun contest :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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P.S. Awtry
Date: 5/26/2019 9:32:00 AM
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Thank you Anne-Lise :). ps
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Jack Horne
Date: 5/12/2019 12:54:00 PM
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lovely with a tinge of sadness - beautiful
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P.S. Awtry
Date: 5/12/2019 3:01:00 PM
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Thank you very much Jack :)
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 5/8/2019 10:04:00 PM
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Wonderful PS, this one took me back.. Love it
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P.S. Awtry
Date: 5/10/2019 11:06:00 PM
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Thank you Timothy! I am glad you liked it! :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/7/2019 10:10:00 PM
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Nostalgia sweetly penned. Very, very nice... I especially like the (planned?) ambiguity of "They" near the end. Kudos! :) gw
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P.S. Awtry
Date: 5/7/2019 10:53:00 PM
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Thank you Gershon! I always appreciate your comments :)
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Wren Rushing
Date: 5/7/2019 6:52:00 PM
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A lovely stroll down memory lane! Thank you P.S. for the wonderful walk!
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P.S. Awtry
Date: 5/7/2019 6:55:00 PM
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Thank you Wren. Glad you liked it :). -ps
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 5/7/2019 5:52:00 PM
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Life would be rather dreary sans memories to dwell on! Aloha! Rico
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P.S. Awtry
Date: 5/7/2019 6:27:00 PM
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Yes you are right :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/7/2019 5:09:00 PM
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I can picture the scene so vividly PS, a poem I am sure many can relate to, good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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P.S. Awtry
Date: 5/7/2019 5:18:00 PM
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Jan, thank you for your visit and comment. <3

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