Remind To Feel

She reminds me of how to feel
a surrounding of those special senses
I'm defenseless
and it's fine
to open up to her and her shine
like a flower in May
giving all my beauty
for tomorrow and today
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Chiri Avatar
December 2, 2025 at 9:15 PM
Your way with words at times amaze me! So keep doing what you doing and I’ll stay amazed:)
Allison Avatar
June 28, 2024 at 9:56 AM
aww so romantic as ever Tim:-) hugs jan xx hope you and your gorgeous family are all ok xx
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