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Remembrance Shall Soon Cease

I do not ask of your sympathy, For I am too far gone. I shall part to set you free, And allow you to move on. Your misery will come to end, Just let yourself forget. Your heart will soon begin to mend, But now my sun must set. It may be agony to remember, So lose me from your mind. Once a fire, now an ember, You'll search, and then will find. Though no longer do I live, To you, my heart I give.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/4/2012 10:54:00 PM
This is wonderfully crafted and filled with such heartfelt emotion. I enjoyed reading this poem today. Keep up the wonderful work! You are a swell poet. Always, Laura
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Date: 1/22/2012 2:35:00 PM
No one gets over the death of someone they care about. And I know people care about you. I've never even met you, and I care. I thought people would get over my death when I tried to kill myself, but then I saw things through their eyes. If I lost someone close to me, I would see them in everything sad and everything beautiful. Please accept help and realize that there is so much to live for. You just have to have the courage to not just find it, but create it. I would like to talk to you. .
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Date: 1/19/2012 7:37:00 PM
Danny yes it is a very very beautiful poem, but I do worry I worry deeply. No one moves on when they lose the one they love, they remain shattered and all the beautiful poetry in the world does not heal that wound nothing heals that wound! Nothing can heal the wounds of destroying the hearts of those who love you! Courage strength and hope is what is needed to face each beautiful sunrise!
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