Remembrance of Things Passed

When old age arrives adorned in grey grace, 
When desultory dreams of fast fled youth 
Persistently insist on poignant truth - 
Among a few, stands out one loving face. 

That one she so capriciously ignored, 
Audaciously still spinning Fortune’s wheel. 
While life of youth promised the better deal,  
She spurned his love and chose to be adored. 

Now by the fireplace she reminisces - 
If strolled another path where would she be… ?
Nostalgic tears drip on old diary, 
That love, heartfelt deal, she dearly misses.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Edmonds  Avatar
January 21, 2025 at 6:12 PM
A lovely poem Margarita, congratulations on your win in Sara’s contest… Beryl
Woods Avatar
January 21, 2025 at 12:51 PM
Lovely interpretation of the poets words! Congratulations! Xo
Kendrick Avatar
January 21, 2025 at 10:40 AM
I am dropping by to say a personal thank you for your entry in my contest. Way to go. I have read and re-read Yeat's poem and each time I find a little something different in its lines. I hope you will read some more of his work. Sara K
Lillico  Avatar
January 21, 2025 at 4:44 PM
Lovely contest! Thank you!
Goldsmith Avatar
January 21, 2025 at 7:59 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. I love your line, "Nostalgic tears drip on old diary." I think at is part of old age... Have a blessed day with your win as you write away..................
Lillico  Avatar
January 21, 2025 at 9:53 AM
Thanks Paula!
Radice Avatar
January 14, 2025 at 11:05 PM
A touching, poignant poem that adds credence to that John Barrymore quote about old age - "when regrets take the place of dreams." Love the abba rhyme scheme too Margarita. Cheers - Gary
Lillico  Avatar
January 15, 2025 at 12:38 PM
Ah, regrets over dreams. Thank you, Gary.
M  Avatar
January 14, 2025 at 1:32 PM
Awww that is truly beautiful Margarita….reflection of things passed grows with old age! Love it…..Debx
Lillico  Avatar
January 15, 2025 at 12:38 PM
Thanks Deb!
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