Remembrance of a Loved One
take me take me to the ocean summertime summertime
Awe to be young & in love
the tender hand touches a chord
pressed between an object and some fancy free
Embrace the wandering mind into a vintage song
how you have fought so hard and fierce
my one truest love is gone from here
a challenge to be free is a quest of time
my one solution is in using my mind
living on the edge and its going to my head
sitting up at night all alone in bed
following the rainbow to the sky
I see a vision of you pass me by
Our war we are in is almost over
it's so hard to believe I lost my lover
loving you is so untrue that's why I must say to you
your too young to fall in love if you don't stop you'll just get shoved
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