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Remembrance of a Loved One

How You Had Fought So Hard and Fierce ! My true love was gone from here.., The challenge to be free is a question of time, My one solution is using my mind.., Living on the edge and its' going to my head ! Sitting up at night all alone in bed.., Following the rainbow to the sky ! I see a crystal clear vision of you pass me by, Our war were in is almost over ? It's so hard to believe that I had lost my Lover ?

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Date: 5/4/2010 4:31:00 PM
Interesting beginning........LIght & Love
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Date: 3/19/2010 4:51:00 PM
Remembrance was my first poem written for Michelle Lee Santoro (1989),
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Date: 3/19/2010 4:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 3/17/2010 5:31:00 PM
Awesome poem feature this week Mario. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/17/2010 6:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Mario. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/14/2010 11:34:00 PM
Nice but sad. Congratulations though on your poem being featured this week. Keep your pen flowing. Ernilando
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