Remembrance of a Loved One

How You Had Fought So Hard and Fierce !


My true love was gone from here..,

The challenge to be free is a question of time,

My one solution is using my mind..,

Living on the edge and its' going to my head !

Sitting up at night all alone in bed..,

Following the rainbow to the sky !

I see a crystal clear vision of you pass me by,

Our war were in is almost over ?

It's so hard to believe that I had lost my Lover ?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Guzzi Avatar
May 4, 2010 at 4:31 PM
Interesting beginning........LIght & Love
Vitale Avatar
March 19, 2010 at 4:51 PM
Remembrance was my first poem written for Michelle Lee Santoro (1989),
Kendrick Avatar
March 19, 2010 at 4:55 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
Freeman Avatar
March 17, 2010 at 5:31 PM
Awesome poem feature this week Mario. Agape, Moses
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March 17, 2010 at 6:50 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Mario. Love, Carol
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March 14, 2010 at 11:34 PM
Nice but sad. Congratulations though on your poem being featured this week. Keep your pen flowing. Ernilando
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