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Remembrance

pains of loved one gone.
no tangible events now.
lives in silent mind.

appreciationdeath of a friendsenryu

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Sara Kendrick

April 16, 2026 at 4:25 PM

Nice one featured on homepage. Congratulations to you. Way to go. Sara K

Ronald A. Williams

April 21, 2026 at 8:48 AM

Thanks

Andrea Dietrich

June 15, 2018 at 7:22 PM

a solemn remembrance this is Ronald.

Ronald A. Williams

June 17, 2018 at 9:06 AM

Yes Andrea, written inspired by a poetrysoup starter that I got inspired and refined for a well written write with talent write. Amen

Arturo Michael

April 9, 2018 at 11:08 AM

Imagine if they were speaking from the other side...dead troubles...invoking imagery and sound...A good day to you Ronald...

Ronald A. Williams

April 9, 2018 at 11:20 AM

Thanks, Arturo. I am glad you see it as profound insight, inspired writing and art work. Amen, Blessings

Pandita Sietesantos

March 3, 2018 at 11:42 PM

What a deep powerful message delivered in a few effective words! Well done my friend! Great Haiku! Best regards. Pandita

Ronald A. Williams

March 20, 2018 at 5:32 PM

Thanks Pandita, I could of sworn that I might of replied to you sooner. Anyhow, Thanks for your comment. Today, I made one silent adjustment, (a play on words). Take another look. Blessings.

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 26, 2018 at 4:44 AM

- Lovely haiku, Ronald - Well done - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ronald A. Williams

March 20, 2018 at 5:33 PM

Hi Sunshine Smile, I made one silent adjustment, (a play on words). Take another look. Blessings.

Ronald A. Williams

February 26, 2018 at 6:32 AM

Thanks Sunshine Smile, got the inspiration looking to assist a possible beginner poet. Amen

Vijay Pandit

February 19, 2018 at 6:46 AM

So much is said in your short poem, Ronald..so true, they stay alive long after!

Ronald A. Williams

March 20, 2018 at 5:35 PM

Vijay Pandit; today, I made one silent adjustment (a play on words). Take another look. Blessings.

Ronald A. Williams

March 20, 2018 at 5:35 PM

Vijay Pandit; today, I made one silent adjustment (a play on words). Take another look. Blessings.

Ronald A. Williams

February 24, 2018 at 12:41 PM

Amen, just one last edit for poetic Artistry, hopefully perfection now in words and intent. Amen, Blessings

Ronald A. Williams

February 23, 2018 at 3:24 PM

One just one more word, done. Amen, Blessings.

Ronald A. Williams

February 23, 2018 at 2:10 PM

One last edit.

Ronald A. Williams

February 23, 2018 at 1:52 PM

Also, just now a revamped to perfection. Amen, Blessings.

Ronald A. Williams

February 23, 2018 at 1:27 PM

A recent Oops corrected. Line 2 had two extra syllables. Now correct and even more better. Amen, Blessings.

Ronald A. Williams

February 20, 2018 at 6:18 PM

A little back tracking, now perfected. Look again.

Ronald A. Williams

February 19, 2018 at 7:49 PM

Amen, Thanks Vijay. I just edited for a more classical write and very much unique though but still the same. Amen, Blessing. Art and thoughts unite. R.A.W.