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Remembrance

pains of loved one gone. no tangible events now. lives in silent mind.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/15/2018 7:22:00 PM

a solemn remembrance this is Ronald.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 6/17/2018 9:06:00 AM

Yes Andrea, written inspired by a poetrysoup starter that I got inspired and refined for a well written write with talent write. Amen

Arturo Michael

Date: 4/9/2018 11:08:00 AM

Imagine if they were speaking from the other side...dead troubles...invoking imagery and sound...A good day to you Ronald...

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 4/9/2018 11:20:00 AM

Thanks, Arturo. I am glad you see it as profound insight, inspired writing and art work. Amen, Blessings

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 3/3/2018 11:42:00 PM

What a deep powerful message delivered in a few effective words! Well done my friend! Great Haiku! Best regards. Pandita

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 3/20/2018 5:32:00 PM

Thanks Pandita, I could of sworn that I might of replied to you sooner. Anyhow, Thanks for your comment. Today, I made one silent adjustment, (a play on words). Take another look. Blessings.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/26/2018 4:44:00 AM

- Lovely haiku, Ronald - Well done - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 3/20/2018 5:33:00 PM

Hi Sunshine Smile, I made one silent adjustment, (a play on words). Take another look. Blessings.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/26/2018 6:32:00 AM

Thanks Sunshine Smile, got the inspiration looking to assist a possible beginner poet. Amen

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/19/2018 6:46:00 AM

So much is said in your short poem, Ronald..so true, they stay alive long after!

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 3/20/2018 5:35:00 PM

Vijay Pandit; today, I made one silent adjustment (a play on words). Take another look. Blessings.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 3/20/2018 5:35:00 PM

Vijay Pandit; today, I made one silent adjustment (a play on words). Take another look. Blessings.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/24/2018 12:41:00 PM

Amen, just one last edit for poetic Artistry, hopefully perfection now in words and intent. Amen, Blessings

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/23/2018 3:24:00 PM

One just one more word, done. Amen, Blessings.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/23/2018 2:10:00 PM

One last edit.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/23/2018 1:52:00 PM

Also, just now a revamped to perfection. Amen, Blessings.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/23/2018 1:27:00 PM

A recent Oops corrected. Line 2 had two extra syllables. Now correct and even more better. Amen, Blessings.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/20/2018 6:18:00 PM

A little back tracking, now perfected. Look again.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/19/2018 7:49:00 PM

Amen, Thanks Vijay. I just edited for a more classical write and very much unique though but still the same. Amen, Blessing. Art and thoughts unite. R.A.W.

Arturo Michael

Date: 2/19/2018 4:36:00 AM

And in spirit too...Lovely Haiku...All the best

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 3/20/2018 5:55:00 PM

Hi Arturo; today, I made one silent adjustment (a play on words). Take another look. Blessings.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 3/20/2018 5:55:00 PM

Hi Arturo; today, I made one silent adjustment (a play on words). Take another look. Blessings.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/24/2018 12:41:00 PM

Amen, just one last edit for poetic Artistry, hopefully perfection now in words and intent. Amen, Blessings

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/23/2018 3:24:00 PM

One just one more word, done. Amen, Blessings.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/23/2018 2:10:00 PM

One last edit.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/23/2018 1:52:00 PM

Also, just now a revamped to perfection. Amen, Blessings.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/23/2018 1:26:00 PM

A recent Oops corrected. Line 2 had two extra syllables.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/20/2018 6:19:00 PM

A little back tracking, now perfected. look again.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/19/2018 7:50:00 PM

Hi, Arturo, I just edited for a more classical write and very much unique though but still the same. Amen, Blessing. Art and thoughts unite. R.A.W.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/19/2018 6:43:00 AM

Thanks, Arturo, Blessings.