Remembering Your Song

Let me hear your love song
Whilst in silence I was long
Let me taste your melody
Like sweet berries on my tongue
Let me hear your love song
Slide your bow across the strings
Move to the wave of my arms
Declare your love song to me
Open wide the pores of my heart
Like baby birds awaiting treats
Fill me with your aching music
With your rapid rhythm beats
Over stones the rising rapture
Of ocean waves rolling through
Frantic climax a memory after
This sweet love song to me, from you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Knox Avatar
July 11, 2024 at 5:57 PM
I love the rhythm of your poem. It is beautifully written. You have talent. Keep writing.
Woods Avatar
July 11, 2024 at 10:38 PM
Hi, Mr.Knox! What a pleasure to find your visit here today! I appreciate your kind comments! I'd love to visit your poetry and will do so soon! Thanks again...Crystol xo
Poet Avatar
June 9, 2024 at 6:45 PM
A lovely, passionate piece of love poems and music in memory Crystol. Thanks for your comment on my page
Woods Avatar
June 10, 2024 at 6:47 AM
Tysm! I enjoy reading your work very much!
Edmonds  Avatar
June 9, 2024 at 6:15 PM
A beautiful love melody in memory Cristol… Beryl
Woods Avatar
June 10, 2024 at 6:44 AM
Thanks for dropping in! <3
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