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Remembering Your Song

Let me hear your love song Whilst in silence I was long Let me taste your melody Like sweet berries on my tongue Let me hear your love song Slide your bow across the strings Move to the wave of my arms Declare your love song to me Open wide the pores of my heart Like baby birds awaiting treats Fill me with your aching music With your rapid rhythm beats Over stones the rising rapture Of ocean waves rolling through Frantic climax a memory after This sweet love song to me, from you.

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Date: 7/11/2024 5:57:00 PM
I love the rhythm of your poem. It is beautifully written. You have talent. Keep writing.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 7/11/2024 10:38:00 PM
Hi, Mr.Knox! What a pleasure to find your visit here today! I appreciate your kind comments! I'd love to visit your poetry and will do so soon! Thanks again...Crystol xo
Date: 6/9/2024 6:45:00 PM
A lovely, passionate piece of love poems and music in memory Crystol. Thanks for your comment on my page
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Crystol Woods
Date: 6/10/2024 6:47:00 AM
Tysm! I enjoy reading your work very much!
Date: 6/9/2024 6:15:00 PM
A beautiful love melody in memory Cristol… Beryl
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Crystol Woods
Date: 6/10/2024 6:44:00 AM
Thanks for dropping in! <3
Date: 6/9/2024 5:11:00 PM
Sweetly sensual love poetry Crystol. I'm sure Harvey loved it
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Crystol Woods
Date: 6/9/2024 5:17:00 PM
This was about my first love whom I lost... but Harvey does love the poetry of it and understand we all have pasts. Ty for commenting Tom! Xo

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