Remembering Your Lost Love Again

Many many years from now on a busy morning, suddenly for a moment Mallika my name in your mind, it will force you to stop and look at the sky and from your heart will come out a deep sigh, memories of love, suddenly so fresh like a 'dewed' morning rose remembering your lost love again absentmindedly you will touch my last gift with moist eyes, "love thy name is eternity" your fingers will follow this line on that bone china vase, I know time will go slow though tears will flow faster and I will be nowhere near you "before the next teardrop falls", only my memories closer,nearer to you, happy,joyful,cheerful,pleasant days when the moon rose in the sky just for us, will these glimpses of happy days wipe tears from your eyes? If not,if you are still running on empty just listen to my words floating in the air, "love thy name is eternity". © kash poet 2012 ===================000=================== Placement: 5th (June 2012) Contest:Mish-Mash Sponsor:Tracie RULES FOR THIS POEM (HA HA HA HA...enjoyed the challenge) =========================================== Line 1.. must have 13 syllibles Line 2.. use the name of someone you love in this line Line 3.. must rhyme with Line 4 Line 4.. see above Line 5.. can only have 3 words Line 6.. must contain a palindrome Line 7.. use the title of your poem in this line Line 8.. must rhyme with line 3 & 4 Line 9.. must be one of your favorite short quotes Line 10.. use the name of a country in this line Line 11.. 5 words in this line must rhyme Line 12.. use only 6 syllibles in this line Line 13.. Add all or part of a song title to this line Line 14..use a synonym in this line Line 15.. use 4 different words that mean the same thing in this line. Line 16.. you cant use the letters A D or L in this line Line 17.. Use the words happy and eyes in this line Line 18.. the words 'running on empty' must be used in this line Line 19.. must rhyme with line 12 Line 20.. Use a line from one of your old poems in this line.

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Date: 6/25/2012 6:32:00 PM
Good job of following the rules fav line [your fingers will follow this line on that bone china vase] Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 6/23/2012 1:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Tracie's "Mish-Mash" contest Kash. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/22/2012 8:11:00 AM
This is so beautiful, who would believe that you were following a mish-mash of form? It does not seem contrived at all....this is lovely, Kash! Congratulations!
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Date: 6/21/2012 8:18:00 PM
I am so impressed by yours, Kashinath, because YOU did a very difficult challenge that was not even in your native tongue and managed to pull it off, making it come together as a very readable and beautiful poem. Congrats on your most well deserved win.
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Date: 6/21/2012 9:54:00 AM
ohh my, an extraordinary shift from your usual style, kashi.... this makes me shiver, not with cold, but ecstasy, grreat poem!...win it!..:) huggs!
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Date: 6/17/2012 12:02:00 AM
one of the VERY best I've seen for this contest. Congratulations on accomplishing the feat of a well done poem with those many rules. I applaud you, Kash!!
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Date: 6/16/2012 4:57:00 PM
Kash, sad .. good luck in the mish-mash contest..pd
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Date: 6/16/2012 4:47:00 PM
I tho't about doing this contest...the coolest concept! You have written something so elegant...enjoying these images...Best of luck!...Did your comment under my poem mean u need a swimming coach? Oh, I got 2 of them at my house...2 daughters who are like fish! Gwendolen
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Date: 6/16/2012 4:17:00 PM
Very creative and expressive work for the contest..Winners' circle for sure...Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work is uplifting..Sara
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Date: 6/16/2012 9:46:00 AM
wow, man. The beauty in your poetry just outstanding. Written with such passion and emotion. Love it! *smiles* RON
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