Remembering When

The Old Tree Fort I remember when.... We looked upon a sea of brown- roofed housetops where we knew the names of families up the street and down... We'd spy and laugh, with reckless shame I remember when... That sagging door in our wood box was much too squat for Mary Sue To squeeze her bouncy redhead locks She had to bend her frame in two I remember when... The summer afternoons were meant for kids like me, who came and went That tree house box, where hours spent was our hide out, from heaven sent
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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June 18, 2013 at 1:08 PM
Another beautiful poem from you Carrie.Lovely read.
Dietrich Avatar
June 18, 2013 at 12:55 AM
how sweet the way you focused on one small thing but it was so significant in your young life. Well done. I like the way you did this contest.
Hamilton Avatar
June 17, 2013 at 4:51 PM
what great memories TFS and congrats on win Shadow x smile
Carrillo Avatar
June 17, 2013 at 7:46 AM
I like this very much. It is good to have memories. Congrats. on your win.... Lucilla
Horne Avatar
June 15, 2013 at 11:14 AM
love this nostalgic gem, Carrie - congrats on your wins : )
Bauer Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 10:45 AM
this is wonderful! it really brings that tree house to life...
Horsman Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 8:24 AM
Wow Carrie, i'm in a reminiscing mood at the moment, you being here on soup when i first came on board nearly 4 years ago, i do not see alot of you, but one thing for sure, you are an amazing poet, and i've just loved everything i've read of yours,, include this beauty, so to that list i will add also.... you truly are an inspiration....
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June 13, 2013 at 10:56 PM
Very sweet, Carrie! Nice work...jimbo
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