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Remembering Still

~*~ remembering still, the little girl that was, so lost, lonely and me, years ago . . . . on the dappled porch, humming songs to myself, all my dolls pretty, while, birds twitter . . . china cups for all, filled with tea not too hot, wearing grandma's old dress, make pretend . . . I tell them stories, all the pretty dolls, just, whispering so softly, my secrets . . . raven hair hanging, in a tangled sweet mess, the dolls all quiet, while, my tears fall . . . . ______________________ May 9, 2013 Poetry/Verse/Melancholy/remembering still Copyright Protected, ID 05-476-816-09 All Rights Reserved, 2013, Constance La France
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May 11, 2013 at 9:29 PM
Constance :-) Have yourself a wonderful and lovely Mother's Day. Lots of Luv & Hugs *Linda"
Horne Avatar
May 11, 2013 at 3:28 PM
another real beauty here, my friend
Richards Avatar
May 10, 2013 at 9:25 AM
I'm anxious to try this new form. But who can top your melancholy memories? (Reminding me of my own childhood with my dollies and tiny china tea cups)?
Sivey Avatar
May 9, 2013 at 6:22 PM
This is another great example of your Melancholy form! I truly loved reading this masterful and lovely poem this evening! What an amazing piece my friend! Great Work!!
La France Avatar
May 9, 2013 at 6:08 PM
Check out my new contest called Melancholy Memory using this form I created, 35 entries, deadline June 10, constance
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