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Remembering Scrooge

When I was in pigtails, years younger than him,
my big brother’s bedroom was filled to the brim
New comic books, from the small corner store
would light up his eyes, from the ceiling to floor
Every nickel or dime, that he earned doing chores
would be spent for the latest.  A hundred or more

My brother, the neat freak, a geek,... I would say
would sort them, like treasures, kept neatly in bins
His room was off limits, from small grubby, hands

I was given such warnings, or my life was to end
Of course, in ignoring….the rules I would bend...

I loved, most, the skin-flint (That old duck that quacked!)
I'm not talking Donald, in the blue sailor suit 
I'd choose Uncle Scrooge, holding big sacks of loot !
Perhaps because my brother, was a bit like that duck
A skin-flint with comics….he hoarded his stacks!

I never dared touch them, or war would be waged
Dread if I tore one, or bent just a page!

But there came on that day, that I'll never forget
My birthday arrived, almost eight, I would bet
I woke in surprise, for at the foot of my bed
Boxes of comics....a present he said
My “Big Brother, Scrooge”, with his heart so divine
Had given me love, of the comical kind !



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True Story!


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For Contest: Comic Book Characters
Sponsored by Shadow Hamilton
Revised 5/29/15
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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June 6, 2015 at 11:07 PM
Carrie, Congratulations on your Comic Book Characters win. Have a good one. SKAT
Allison Avatar
June 5, 2015 at 2:22 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Carrie:-) Hugs Jan xx
Haight Avatar
June 5, 2015 at 10:27 AM
I like your outside the box take on "Scrooge," Carrie! Congratulations on your fine win! Hugs, Sandra
Hamilton Avatar
June 5, 2015 at 8:21 AM
Uncle Scrooge oh boy yes Carrie delightful story congrats on placing hugs
Richards Avatar
June 5, 2015 at 8:52 AM
Thank you so much, Shadow. This is a true story of my big brother's best side !! He has always been a good guy in the end !! Thanks so much for the honor to tell my story !!
Konos Avatar
June 5, 2015 at 7:41 AM
Congratulations
Bauer Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 7:47 PM
a sweet story, carrie, and very well told!
Dietrich Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 7:40 PM
oh my what a sweet ending to this one. He gave you a bunch of comic books. (maybe he had finally moved on his life and decided girls were his new "thing" haha) Great write, Carrie. Looks like another disgruntled non premium member below!
Konos Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 5:06 PM
Loved it as usual...Tell YOYO that you are likely in the comic character contest and if you are not...You just missed placing number one...
Richards Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 5:23 PM
Thanks again, Judy !
Allison Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 4:29 PM
what a charming poem Carrie - lovely description - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx 7
Smith Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 4:18 PM
A lovely story Carrie...A great brother/sister moment
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