Remembering My Love

I want to say just I want to love you forever,
for I know life will not be easy if i don't accept it.
If I carry on with my love i will make an excellence of emotion,
life will thus taken on a active note.
I will simply understand and make my world,
just to live in it with never say die approach,
one who looks for its goal objectively,
thus reach to its destination with ease and newness.
I love you thus to realize the self in order to understand you.
Jobs left are in plenty that we will have to do together.
And I just say that our bodies are different yet soul one.
God has made our combination for a fructifying effort.
I fear if we don't live together,
our togetheness is our never ending happiness.
Just know me with a perfect smile, 
and I will see that everything goes on smoothly all the while.
I love you to understand the natures creation.
Our love makes a family, 
just to go on wth life in all its circumstances,
to ward off the difficulties and to accept the reality.
Thus love makes all sense to know this relation, 
if we carry on love it makes remembrances of splendid emotions,
things that takes us to new places,
that makes us to believe with satisfaction ,
making thus life enjoyable and full of commitment. 
I am sure your love takes me to tenacity of purpose,
and handle with care the things to be done,
problems of life are solved with love 
and annihilation of these problems takes me to bounden duty.
Your love thus makes me a man with a deep sense of realisation,
to accept life in all its proposition.
I find my affairs messy if I don't love you,
and to not love you is just like walking on a slippery path,
that will take me to apocalypse,
and from your love I have realised that world has not to perish.
Your love fills me with inqusitiveness,
it is just knowing, making and living in this word.
From your love I have learnt how to care
thus put an end to vicissitudes of life in totality.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Barden Avatar
November 5, 2018 at 12:38 AM
Sincere congratulations for your awesome win in LuLoo's contest, Deepak - blessings and best wishes - keep up the great work, my friend! :-)
Srivastava Avatar
November 5, 2018 at 3:39 AM
thanks.
Gauthier Avatar
October 28, 2018 at 5:54 PM
Congrats on your too win, Deepak, with this very emotive poem.
Srivastava Avatar
October 28, 2018 at 11:45 PM
thank you , Mr line.
Scars Avatar
October 28, 2018 at 11:53 AM
so powerful, great emotions are felt. Thank you and congratulations on your placement. -luloo :)
Srivastava Avatar
October 28, 2018 at 11:46 PM
thanks.
Horsman Avatar
October 4, 2018 at 6:32 AM
Love sure is a powerful emotion, like the poem, and the sentiment behind the pen..
Srivastava Avatar
October 4, 2018 at 11:56 PM
Thanks Harry.
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