Remembering My Dad

You silently live in my subconscious
as I sleep, buttressing my optimism.
When I awake, I am surprised
by a major miracle—
I am the essence of your smile.
 
Inexplicably, your voice 
like ripe, sun warmed fruits
resonates inside my head and
beats my heart like a drum,
 consuming me softly and gently.
 
Your presence is palpable like 
the tides in the sea; never ending.
You touched me with artistic splendor
and I will pour out everything inside me
so that your memory will be fortified.
 
Dad, you left me your music
written with notes of benevolence.
You are the eternal flame inside me
that causes every cell to twinkle
like starlight.
 
Death is no enemy, but the foundation
of gratitude, sympathy, and art.
Your love will linger long after
the wind has erased your footprints
from the universe.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
August 30, 2011 at 6:57 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Lola. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
Mehta Avatar
August 29, 2011 at 9:13 PM
Nice dedication to your dad, lola
Sweetheart Avatar
August 29, 2011 at 5:27 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your tender poetry on Dad ..enjoy the site with its many features as u continue to share words with luv...
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