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Remembering My Dad

You silently live in my subconscious as I sleep, buttressing my optimism. When I awake, I am surprised by a major miracle— I am the essence of your smile. Inexplicably, your voice like ripe, sun warmed fruits resonates inside my head and beats my heart like a drum, consuming me softly and gently. Your presence is palpable like the tides in the sea; never ending. You touched me with artistic splendor and I will pour out everything inside me so that your memory will be fortified. Dad, you left me your music written with notes of benevolence. You are the eternal flame inside me that causes every cell to twinkle like starlight. Death is no enemy, but the foundation of gratitude, sympathy, and art. Your love will linger long after the wind has erased your footprints from the universe.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/30/2011 6:57:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Lola. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 8/29/2011 9:13:00 PM
Nice dedication to your dad, lola
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Date: 8/29/2011 5:27:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your tender poetry on Dad ..enjoy the site with its many features as u continue to share words with luv...
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