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Remembering Laura

Walking South
on the beach
in front of Doral
I heard a woman sing ...
“If you put the man
back in romance
I’ll put the lay
back in lady”
Catching up to her
I asked
where she first
heard the song
She said: “It’s mine
do you like it?
It still
needs more work
I was hoping 
this walk
would enchant
or inspire”
At the Fontainebleau
I said: “I do very much
Let me help you write 
 the second verse”

(Miami Beach: 1982)


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