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Remembering Grace

I danced with Grace across marble floors
Her whispers still linger "I am yours, take me"
We waltzed on over to the nearest door
A coat room that we sanctioned heavenly
These memories survive, still haunting me

lost lovequintain (english)

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Carol Sunshine Brown

April 19, 2011 at 5:01 AM

Congratulations Mitch on your well deserved win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "God, Ghost, and Love". Love, Carol

John Freeman

April 16, 2011 at 5:42 PM

Great to see you at the top once more Mitch. Congratulations on this worthy poem's honored third place. Agape, Moses

Dr Hitendra Mehta

April 16, 2011 at 3:43 AM

Many congrats Mitch for big win in Dr Ram's contest. Luv & best wishes always - Hitendra Mehta

Gautami Phookan

April 16, 2011 at 3:34 AM

Super Congrats Mitch on your 3rd place win.A picture of elegance and beauty is portrayed through these words.Loved it.Gautami

Andrea Dietrich

April 15, 2011 at 6:00 PM

I LOVE this,Mitch. A hauntingly beautiful write. Congratulations. (was there really a Grace?)

Elaine George

April 15, 2011 at 5:56 PM

Ahhhh! Those memories are forever - lasting. Many congrats on your BIG WIN, Mitch, Lainie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 15, 2011 at 4:06 PM

Congrats Mitch on your super win in Dr. Ram's contest my friend..an awesome entry luv.. enjoy and happy weekend luv..

Sara Kendrick

April 15, 2011 at 3:25 PM

Good one..Congratulations on your win..Sara

Debbie Guzzi

April 15, 2011 at 2:40 PM

How wonderful a short story done so well in 5 lines HUZZAH! Congrad's Light & Love

Dr.Ram Mehta

April 15, 2011 at 8:28 AM

Congratulations on the third place win in my contest, Mitch

Andrea Dietrich

April 6, 2011 at 2:43 PM

Is this for that one ghost contest of Dr. Ram's. I love how you did it. I would like to go this route . I hope we dont have to mention God and a ghost inside the poem. HOpe this beauty does well!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

April 6, 2011 at 8:56 AM

You sure got me blushing, Mitch-- I just read your comment on Andrea's poem--oh wow, I stole your heart?? I never even knew that! That was such a sweet thing to say, thank you :) do you want a piece of it back now? haha I am selfish, not giving you back the whole ;) let me savor it a bit more (uh-oh now I think I am sounding like a vampire or something, lol)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 6, 2011 at 8:45 AM

An expressive memory penned so beautifully Mitch .. good luck if for any contest posted luv.. u painted a visual masterpiece in words ..hope u are doing well and are happy .. blessings with luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

April 6, 2011 at 8:39 AM

glad to hear you after a long time and that too with a graceful waltz, Mitch

Carol Sunshine Brown

April 6, 2011 at 6:54 AM

It has been a pleasure to read your poetry today Mitch. I hope to get back soon to read more of your poetry. May you always find inspiration to carry on with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

April 6, 2011 at 6:03 AM

Hi Mitch-- wow, how are you?? I had a smile on my face as soon as I saw your name in the new poems list, I was like, long time no hear from you! I was about to comment here then I see your inspiring comments in my poems-- I hope all is well with you! This is such a romantic write, yet bittersweet-- I could almost picture you waltzing with Grace, just beautiful :) enjoy your day ok and smiles back to you :)

Remembering Grace

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