Remembering Dad

Sumtymes when i sit to think, 
All those success comes to a shrink.
Life is just a rattling race
Hurts a lot wanna be in your embrace.

Sumtimes when i'm tired and churned.
looked back at space and images conjured.
And then u held me in ur arms, 
Where have u gone DAD leaving me drained.

U never made me 
Feel short of anything, 
Did all da hard work, 
To keep me basking.

Still remember the days
When we sat together.
watching cricket..
ohh FATHER! ! ! 


And da nights, 
when i sleep offmood.
U would wake me up, 
To take my food.


And there were
myriad manifestations of ur love, 
From big hefty presents, 
To sweet little hug.


And i'm longing 
For ur love DAD, 
I'm still 20 
still a little lad..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 5/29/2010 9:42:00 PM
congrats on your HM in the feeling contest. LUv, andrea
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Date: 5/28/2010 9:50:00 AM
thnx a lot buddies for such a nice support and encouragement..
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Date: 5/28/2010 9:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Paula's " Feel The Feelings" contest Amit. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/25/2010 7:38:00 PM
Congrats Amit on your HM in Paula's contest with this wonderful write.. enjoy your honor.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/24/2010 9:42:00 PM
enjoyed, brings lots of emotions at the end,..p.d.
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Date: 5/24/2010 9:35:00 PM
Very endearing poem to remember your dad, sure he's proud of you, Amit. Nice sharing this. (^_^) Noel
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Date: 5/24/2010 8:49:00 PM
NICE ON THE DEDICATION, YOUR DAD IS SUPER FOR MAKING U FEEL YOU ARE HIS WORLD. HE IS STILL WITH U, IN EVERY STEP U R TAKING I AM SURE HE IS THERE. LOVE IT, U DID SUCH A NICE AND TOUCHING JOB ON YOUR POEM TODAY,,SKAT
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