Remembering Back...

Three and a half years
After “we” parted,
Remembering back
When “we” first started.

The laughter and tears
The times that we shared,
Remember back
How much we had cared.

You would take me out
We’d go on long walks
Remembering back
All our sincere talks.

As I think it out
Asking myself why
Remember back
Was it all a lie?

A couple months passed
We got back in touch
Remembering back
I loved you so much.

We realized time
May bring change of heart
Remembering back
Our very first start.

No more hurt you said
And no more lying
Remembering back
In the rain crying

Awaiting your call
Or knock on the door
Remembering back
My heart sure did soar.

Accepting it now
You never have cared
Remembering back
Everything we shared.

You just want to hurt
And play your own game
Remembering back
It won’t be the same

Goodbye forever
The memories will last
Remembering back
It’s all in the past.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 10/3/2009 5:49:00 AM
A sad but awesome piece that had me following each stanza carefully to follow this heartfelt tale of hurt >> James
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Date: 9/19/2009 9:25:00 PM
Time to move on, as is the case at times, best wishes to you, you belong to yourself first, let time heal the wounds, if any. God bless, Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 9/19/2009 5:03:00 AM
Wow that one brought tears to my eyes. I really feel for you because I have been there. It sounds like you are getting through and that is good. Keep writing you are way good and talented. AWSOME POEM!
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