Remembering

Looking up towards heaven
my final destination
thinking back on my life 
remembering all the good times
all the bad times
all the friends 
who came and went
all the women
who pretended to love me
my trials and tribulations
my ups 
and downs
I remember it all
my first love
my first kiss
my first time
Damn, I have a 
good memory even
at a time like this
I shouldn't be able
to remember things like this but I am
remembering all of these 
things like they were 
happening all at once
my mind shouldn't be on these memories
they should be on more important things
like trying to get out 
of this situation
feeling cold 
body shutting down
I was at the wrong place
at the wrong time
O'God please help me
I know that I don't 
talk to you as much as I should
but if you get me out 
of this one I promise 
I will but if 
you say my time is up
just make sure my family is 
ok that's all I ask thank you
I guess you made up your mind because
I can see the light wait that's 
the ambulance, thank you God
for saving me
now I will have a chance to see my family
one more time and I will keep my promise
and talk to you more often
thank you God because this is 
one memory worth remembering

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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