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When a soul passes We may wallow in our pain We may hold on to dear possessions Like an old loved cane It is understood that as humans we may have our sorrows But we needn't forget That there is still a tomorrow there is no need To sit and complain For we know our loved ones Feel no more pain Even though our hearts may not comprehend That our loved one is gone Or why their life has to end We put our trust in God To guide us on our way To steady our feet And guide us through a new day We must keep living We must keep going Even though our hearts are broken When though we may be morning Because at the end of the day It may be hard for us to deal With all the aching in our hearts We only need to ask him to heel Even though we lost A sister, a daughter, a mother, and a friend We will remember her dearly And in our hearts her spirit will never end

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Date: 7/7/2014 7:59:00 PM
Zyanna,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/27/2014 6:06:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Zyanna. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!
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Date: 6/25/2014 11:57:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Zyanna :) - I choose your first well written poem - (sooo sad ) - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/24/2014 5:06:00 PM
Zyanna,,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 6/24/2014 5:05:00 PM
it's painful when our love ones leave our side but hurtful it maybe we must accept and cherished their left behind memories.this a wonderful write about acceptance, letting go and moving on when we grieve.. reflective write. :) I am Olive and I want to say my WARMEST WELCOME to you! I have been here in Poetrysoup 'bout 2years now, I say that there are lots of fun, learning and more great and nice people here.:) explore and be fascinated here!! i hope as you go on you will enjoy as like I am.. :)
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