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Remember November

And so it comes, this time of year November starts, Christmas so near Animals yawn, sense their big sleep Farmers hay sheds, piled high and steep A breeze descends, from arctic climes Cold and icy, brief days less time Great pines snuggle close together Know what’s in store, snowy weather The bison coats, grow much thicker Suns going down, even quicker Silent nights, reflect lonely streams Only broken, by coyote screams Lay November Poetry Contest Sponsored by: William Kekaula 02/12/2020 Syllable counter PS 12x8 Rhyme check rhyme zone

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Date: 12/9/2020 10:11:00 AM
I like the rhythm, rhyme and flow on this winner. Way to go. Congrats. Sara
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David Kavanagh
Date: 12/9/2020 11:40:00 AM
Thank you Sara, one of those that just seemed to roll of the tongue, delighted it made the cut cheers David
Date: 12/3/2020 4:56:00 PM
As Scorpio i David November Birthday Month Arduous and the onset of winter not a favorite of mine. Are you going to buy the P.S Anthology Book mate See it is already available on Amazon to buy. Might make a nice shocking filler or present from Santa
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 12/4/2020 2:05:00 PM
Yeah # me 2 David For the very reasons you just said or pointed out of getting into the book even or despite that not being a premium member
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David Kavanagh
Date: 12/4/2020 12:31:00 AM
Yeah it’s a must for posterity might even sign up premium membership in the new year for the unbiased fact, of getting into the book, cheers David
Date: 12/2/2020 6:21:00 PM
Thank you for sharing a wondrous part of yourself, David (forgive my misjudgment of the rules: 'aabbcc, aabbcc...' and not 'aabbcc, ddeeff...'), my compliments on your honorable placement, Aloha! William
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David Kavanagh
Date: 12/3/2020 12:28:00 AM
Oops sorry William, think I read the rules wrong, I’m delighted nonetheless to get a honorable placement, in your November contest, now hope you enjoy December, cheers David
Date: 12/2/2020 4:32:00 PM
Lovely tune rhythm. Such neat rhyme. Cosy imagery.... Makes me wish for a Northern Winter. Yours is a sure top Winner, David. It's marvellous to read the beauty and ease you possess in all your contemporary writes.
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David Kavanagh
Date: 12/3/2020 12:40:00 AM
Thanks Sigrid, your right recently I’ve been trying not to force the issue try let it flow, but all depends on my mood, doesn’t everything, chilling out in chilly weather, winters making inroads at the moment, your so lucky in the sun, hopefully not uncomfortably hot, cheers David

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