Remember Me Premiere Contest Winner

Remember Me
Remember me when I am gone,
No need to shed those tears.
For I am in a better place,
Where I have no more fears.
Remember me, my lovely child,
I will always remember you.
I loved you all so very much,
And hope you loved me too.
The time has come, for me to go,
But I won’t be far away.
I  will be walking by your side,
Each and every day.
So come sit with me a while,
And try not to be so sad.
I love you all so very much, 
I was proud to be your Dad.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 12/17/2017 4:27:00 AM
Sincere congratulations on your well-earned win, Donald - best wishes and Merry Christmas to you and yours! :-)
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Date: 12/14/2017 5:23:00 AM
Hi Donald. Congratulations on your win. The poem is chilling and honest. It speaks to me in its simple(?) message. I do not know, whether to ask or not, but I will send you loving wishes and hope that the poem does not reflect your personal situation. Season's greetings in any case and take care. Kai
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Date: 12/1/2017 7:54:00 AM
Bit of a tear jerker :) congratulations on your win! xomo
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Date: 11/30/2017 11:34:00 PM
A very heartfelt write. Congrats on your win with this fine poem, Donald.
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Date: 11/30/2017 9:31:00 PM
Thanks for your submission. Great job on the placement in my contest. James Edward Lee Sr.
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