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Remember Me

Remember me... A fresh sweet scent of last gardenia on yesterday's linen sheets Remember me... A cherry bud in your backyard orchard revealing first pink shades in once upon a soft blown kiss Remember me... An early summer sharing your beach towel and coconut butter Remember me... A roaring log fire on a stormy night in the hallway to your bedroom door Remember me... a short~lived star that fallen into your arms then faded to nothingness upon the empty shore. Remember me ... The blissful moment The saddest song in your forevermore

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Date: 10/4/2017 3:45:00 PM
You my dear are unforgettable! Hugs Rick.
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Date: 11/16/2016 9:13:00 AM
Who could possibly forget after this stunning arrangement. Bitter sweetly scented and affecting.
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Date: 9/6/2016 8:29:00 PM
just gorgeous really gorgeous
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Date: 5/20/2016 8:15:00 AM
: )) SMILE
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Date: 5/14/2015 5:43:00 AM
:)
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Date: 2/2/2015 2:18:00 AM
You have penned something so sad, how many times have i wondered if a lost love remembers the time we were as one sharing all delights. It is truely the saddest song. Thank you for sharing your heart. love shane xxx
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Date: 1/23/2015 8:42:00 AM
Nice poem! I love the refrain how "Remember Me" is repeated over and over so she is not forgotten...!
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Date: 1/3/2015 1:48:00 AM
Very nice. One line is hidden into your poem which is 'Remember me without any demand.' Love for Love...Best to you dear.
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Date: 12/31/2014 8:30:00 PM
To be remebered as both gentle and sad beauty, beauty that awakens us with the potential to haunt as well. Your beauty leaves a mark Charma...J.A.B.
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Date: 12/28/2014 7:59:00 PM
I love this Char, A Fav!
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Date: 12/26/2014 9:57:00 AM
So beautiful as are you! How could one not remember you, dear, Charmaine? Loveliness simply pours from every line of your poems. Many best wishes and blessings in the new year !! Thank you for your constant kindness and good heart!
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Date: 12/25/2014 10:57:00 PM
You have captured my mood, this is so romantic, filled with longing, I loved it!
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Date: 12/25/2014 7:47:00 PM
How could one not remember you...You are unforgettable..... Hugs Tim
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Date: 12/25/2014 5:30:00 PM
oh deep and sad - such beautiful imagery Charma:-) Hugs
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