Remember Me

Remember me... A fresh sweet scent of last gardenia on yesterday's linen sheets Remember me... A cherry bud in your backyard orchard revealing first pink shades in once upon a soft blown kiss Remember me... An early summer sharing your beach towel and coconut butter Remember me... A roaring log fire on a stormy night in the hallway to your bedroom door Remember me... a short~lived star that fallen into your arms then faded to nothingness upon the empty shore. Remember me ... The blissful moment The saddest song in your forevermore
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Lamoureux Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 3:45 PM
You my dear are unforgettable! Hugs Rick.
P  Avatar
November 16, 2016 at 9:13 AM
Who could possibly forget after this stunning arrangement. Bitter sweetly scented and affecting.
Lewis  Avatar
September 6, 2016 at 8:29 PM
just gorgeous really gorgeous
Smith Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 8:15 AM
: )) SMILE
Poet Avatar
May 14, 2015 at 5:43 AM
:)
Cooper Avatar
February 2, 2015 at 2:18 AM
You have penned something so sad, how many times have i wondered if a lost love remembers the time we were as one sharing all delights. It is truely the saddest song. Thank you for sharing your heart. love shane xxx
Karim Avatar
January 23, 2015 at 8:42 AM
Nice poem! I love the refrain how "Remember Me" is repeated over and over so she is not forgotten...!
Goswami Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 1:48 AM
Very nice. One line is hidden into your poem which is 'Remember me without any demand.' Love for Love...Best to you dear.
Bordner Avatar
December 31, 2014 at 8:30 PM
To be remebered as both gentle and sad beauty, beauty that awakens us with the potential to haunt as well. Your beauty leaves a mark Charma...J.A.B.
Yvonne Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 7:59 PM
I love this Char, A Fav!
Richards Avatar
December 26, 2014 at 9:57 AM
So beautiful as are you! How could one not remember you, dear, Charmaine? Loveliness simply pours from every line of your poems. Many best wishes and blessings in the new year !! Thank you for your constant kindness and good heart!
Vaso Avatar
December 25, 2014 at 10:57 PM
You have captured my mood, this is so romantic, filled with longing, I loved it!
Smith Avatar
December 25, 2014 at 7:47 PM
How could one not remember you...You are unforgettable..... Hugs Tim
Allison Avatar
December 25, 2014 at 5:30 PM
oh deep and sad - such beautiful imagery Charma:-) Hugs
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