Remember Me?

I was the one who was sat on the wall
I was so little the others were tall
The school was next door so I didn’t go far
Never needed to go to school by car

I played in the playground with some of my fiends
Long summer days that never seemed to end
That’s a long time ago, can you recall?
The bumps and bruises when taking a fall

Long summer nights turned to autumn browns
As I grew older I had life’s up’s and down’s
Working for a living to make ends meet
Bringing up children that was a treat

Do you remember me? I was young and daft
I couldn’t remember when I last laughed
I had wild ideas but they didn’t last long
I knew back then that I didn’t belong

Now I am older, I’ve survived life’s trials
I’ve cried many tears and travelled miles
Nearing retirement I look back at things
Wondering now what retirement brings

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/27/2010 12:18:00 PM
Hope you are well. Have missed seeing your works. It is hard to keep up with everyone on the soup. Stop by and read some of my sillisms.
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Date: 6/4/2010 2:15:00 AM
I do hope that you will enjoy retirement and keep up with your creative write, Pamela! Thank you for commenting "The Sea" and have a great weekend...Gert
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Date: 5/13/2010 9:24:00 PM
nice write, enjoyed
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Date: 5/13/2010 2:39:00 PM
Thanks Sara x
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Date: 5/13/2010 2:37:00 PM
Great memoir of some of your life...Retirement opens doors to new possibilities....Have a great relaxed life..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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