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Remember Me Poetry Contes, Sponsor - Silent One.  Date written: 06/23/2026

Remember Me


the stars of twilight might fade, 
       the sun might go out,
and years will wear away the granite;
even when shadows are too dark,
i ask of you now, 
     only this...
              remember me.

     the moon will follow 
            the roads we walked,
through old dreams we held;
look at the wild, untouched places,
and i beg of you now
     only this...
              remember me.

    time sure is long, 
           distances are huge,
and voices get lost over years;
do not forget the words I couldn't say
for i ask of you now
       only this...
                remember me.

let the sounds travel in the dark,
across the empty places that are gone;
when only dreams link our souls,
 and i beg of you now
     only this...  
              remember me.
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June 25, 2026 at 10:21 AM
I loved the tenderness of this poem and felt each word... I have been through myself, where a loved one has gone silent and walked away.. .sad, isnt it? Loved so many lines here, especially 'the moon will follow the roads we walked... I think if you have to beg someone to remember you, it is probably not worth it my friend... for if they truly loved you, they would never forget you.... Great take on the prompt, congratulations on your placement..
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June 26, 2026 at 4:58 AM
Thank you so much for my placement, SO:-) Incidentally, this poem is pure fiction. I couldn't agree with you more about begging to be remembered. It's definitely not worth it!
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