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REMEMBER IT ALL

REMEMBER IT ALL So many memories that leave few traces All the friends I knew and their faces And when the time is nigh, at least I’ll try To remember it all It’s been so long, a danger of forgetting As recollection fades it becomes upsetting And when it’s time to rest, I’ll do my best To remember it all The decades pass and we don’t meet that often Is it even true that feelings can soften And playing my last card, it won’t be hard To remember it all Events and times that happened in my youth Whether fact or fantasy, but I know the truth A photo album from which those faces are staring Blurred but smiling, I wonder how they’re faring Images that I still see, and it depends on me To remember it all

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Date: 7/6/2024 5:15:00 AM
Oh I absolutely love this! I can hear someone like Johnny Cash singing this in a blues country melody. Congratulations! Xo
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Date: 7/5/2024 12:34:00 PM
Congratulation on your win. Good write about trying to recall the blooms of youth.
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Date: 7/4/2024 9:49:00 PM
oh my! a beautiful write! As we age we only have memories to live with!! things fade! faces and people! a meeting brings such delight!! Congrats on your 1st placement!! Richly deserved!
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Date: 7/4/2024 10:00:00 AM
I see nostalgia was a predominant theme among the winners. Nice write
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Date: 7/4/2024 7:28:00 AM
Dear Howard, I am deeply moved by your pensive pen. Beautiful and bittersweet, grasping to remember it all.. I was especially touched by "It’s been so long, a danger of forgetting/As recollection fades it becomes upsetting" -so striking. The repetition of "remember it all" grows with emotional depth as you carry it through the wistful verses. Congratulations for your win in Mark's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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