Remember

Remember picnics by the lake
Talking about what it would take
To make our future as one?
I miss all the plans that we had made
All the love we had and gave
Our love, our all
I never thought today
We’d happily go our separate ways
Rid of having enough
I miss all the plans that we had made
All the love we had and gave
But I don’t miss you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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June 7, 2012 at 7:49 AM
When I click on one of your poems I know it will be exceptional David. Thank you for sharing your words with us. I hope all is well with you and yours. I will stop back again soon. Love, Carol
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October 24, 2010 at 6:42 AM
Hi David. Your poem seems a mixture of sweet memories and bitter thoughts or maybe acceptance that two people should go their seperate ways. I liked the way you expressed it all and the wayyour poem reads. Though I am left feeling sad.But to me good poetry does arouse emotion in some way to either make us laugh or as you have done to touch our hearts. Love June(Sylvia)
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